By Abby
During the summer, I played softball. My team name was called the Brewers. I played at the Lydell School.
One game I was up to bat and, the other team gave me a pitch I swung and I missed. The next pitch was a strike but I thought it was a ball. The next one I thought was good and I swung and I got out.
I walked back to my team and they gave me a high five and said nice try. My dad pulled me over and was talking to me about me hitting the ball. He said, watch the ball hit the bat a couple of times. After that great advice, I did not strike out again.
Abby,
Your dad gave you good advice, and you were smart enough to try it out. Good job!
so cool and GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!